Thursday, February 13, 2014

Mindfullness Means Full of Mind


          I originally started this blog on BlogSpot in 2010 when I was only a sophomore in high school. As a sophomore in college, I am now revisiting the blog scene again with a new outlook on writing and blogging. Once I learned that I would be writing weekly a blog post in my basic news writing course, I was extremely excited. I had completely forgotten about this BlogSpot account that I had created about 4 years ago. When I attempted to sign up for BlogSpot in order to create this blog, I stumbled across my long lost blog, which at that present moment was named "Fashionista." As I read over my past blog posts, I wanted to go back into time and hit myself with a dictionary, a grammar book, and some common sense. My style of writing 2 years ago appeared as though it came straight from urbandictionary.com.
         In Ben Yagoda's book How Not to Write Bad, Yagoda measures mindfulness, which means to be aware of your writing in terms of what you are writing, why you are writing, and for whom you are writing. An important point he makes in his book is the opposite of mindfulness, which is carelessness. We expanded upon these ideas and concepts Yagoda brings up in his book in my news writing class. We talked about the importance of punctuation and the difference between formal and informal writing. Formal writing is described in my class as standard written English. Standard written English is complex and complete sentences, objectivity, avoidance of slang, and derived from Latin. Informal writing on the other hand, is the blog I created 4 years ago, which did not include or account for punctuation or spelling, and most importantly it included slang. Slang may not always have a negative connotation, but its use is most likely dependent upon who your audience is. Looking back at my old blog post, I can honestly say I was a careless writer, and I did not consider my audience, or my purpose under any circumstances. Fortunately, today I am well aware of both aspects. Although I am not a completely mindful writer yet, I would consider myself far from careless!!!

He watches the office?

He watches the office? I don't!
Are you still confused?
Good.
This week in my class, we reviewed who vs. whom. If you are still scratching your head trying to figure out what I am talking about, let me break it down for you. Have you ever questioned if your using the right form of who? Did you even care to wonder if there is a difference? I know I didn't. Normally I just go with whatever sounds best at the given moment. But this week in class we reviewed when and how to use the proper form of whom. We learned a simple rule to help those of you like me figure out if your using the correct form.

Rule.....
Replace with he or him. If your sentence flows correctly with the pronoun he then the form you want to use is who. If your sentence flows correctly with the pronoun him then the form you want to use is whom.

Isn't that interesting?
Now.
Who watches the office?

Here is a link that shows you how TV show The Office breaks it down for their viewers.

Punctuation and Pronoun Anticedent Agreement Flyers on Campus

 
 

Punctuation Errors

 
 
Missing punctuation

There should be a camma before and


There should not be an apostrophe in Valentines day.

There should not be an apostrophe in Valentines day. 

 Pronoun Anticedent Agreement


The pronoun we is the vague pronoun in the sentence, "We are offering awesome pay..."


The pronoun they is the vague pronoun in this sentence.