Assignment 7: Copy Edit Article in the Beacon

Assignment 7

 

Article: The Tragedy of Tanning

Writen By Olga Peredery

Copy Edited By Monique LeBrun

“A  tan, whether you get it at the beach, in a bed or through incidental exposure, is a bad news any way you acquire it,” said in an article in Tanning is Not Part of a Healthy Lifestyle.”

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An article in, Tanning is Not Part of a Healthy Lifestyle stated, “A  tan, whether you get it at the beach, in a bed or through incidental exposure, is a bad news any way you acquire it.”

Researchers have proved that the UVA rays from the sun can do damage to the immune system, your eyesight, it also prematurely ages your skin, disrupt skin pigment, cause brown spots and last but not least-cntributes to the development of skin cancer.

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Researchers have proven that the UVA rays from the sun can do damage to your immune system, your eyesight, and your skin. The UVA rays can prematurely age your skin, disrupt skin pigment, and cause brown spots. Lastly sun rays contribute to the development of skin cancer.